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Tears
Tears take time to parish
They begin as just thin emotions
And can end up trickling down the face of anyone
They say tears are a sign of weakness
But to me there a sign of compassion
Compassion towards whatever it is you may have lost or gained
Tears are like rain drops falling on your cheeks
They are the body’s storm
Tears come from any emotional state
They may come from that last goodbye at the train station
Tears tell people that you do care
Tears don’t fall
They crash around me
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Faith
Fearing the worse
Allow me a chance
Inside, your emotions are confused
Take time to realize our love is not used
Have faith in me
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I miss you.
The days go by slow,
The nights are long and filled with fear and confusion.
Why? Why must this happen?
The smell of disaster fills the air
As soon as a thought of you arrives in my mind.
Things turned out for the best..
I guess..
I cannot live, I can’t breathe unless you are by my side, mentally and physically.
Now close your eyes.
What do you see?
Nothing?
That’s my life without you.
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Josh
Tall, Cool, Outgoing
Brother of Joey
Lover of bikes, kool-aid, and water melon
Who feels happy, pinches, no pain
Who needs a dollar, a dollar, a dollar is what he needs
Who gives to the needy, soup, and wet willies
Who fears spiders, sticks in his face, and drowning
Who’d like to see Johnny Knoxville
Who dreams of fields of green, red roses too
A student of Cedar Creek
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When the family gets there, they see the sun beginning to set so they ask a local villager to take a picture of them. The family lines up, and the feller said “Say cheese!” and the flash goes off. But what happens next will shock you, Vanessa was gone. She just disappeared in the blink of an eye. The family’s first reaction was to look off the cliff but there was no body at the bottom. This vacation is not a vacation anymore. It was now a mystery.
Vodipija
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ReplyDeleteI chose this poem because this my first legit poem that I have written. I pu8t everything that i have into this poem making it to me a work of art. I have included various writing tricks to try to perfect this poem.
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ReplyDeleteThis poem means a lot to me. I thought of the idea of it after listening to one my favorite songs by A Day To Remember. The song is about having faith in someone. I feel like anyone can relate to this poem because I'm sure just about everyone has had an experience with someone that they had fancied.
1) this poem is really good you can tell you worked really hard on it.
ReplyDelete1.) This poem came from somewhere, but I have no idea where. I seriously like it though. I lot of good imagery, and strong emotion.
ReplyDelete2.) your poem is not what I expected to find from the word "FAITH", but I love the turn it took in askign for someone to have faith, versus talking about having it.
3.) this one is heartbreaking.